Lisa's Rude Awakening, Part 5

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Lisa's Rude Awakening
"Marty English" 

Please feel free to e-mail me with questions and comments. This story is
based on the most beautiful woman I have ever seen and have fantasized about
for years. I hope you enjoy!

Part 5




I awoke first freezing on the cold carpeting. Without much thinking I leaned
up a little trying not to disturb Lisa as she slept soundly and pulled a
comforter off the sofa onto us. Just before I got it on top of us, Lisa awoke
with a start.

"Ohhhhhh,..........Where?........What?......" Lisa said in a hoarse voice
and stopped speaking for a minute to cough.

"Oh, shit! She's not hypnotized anymore!" I thought as my heart started
racing. Damn it! I was so exhausted, I didn't even think about post-hypnotic
suggestion or what to do in the morning. My dream fantasy may be coming to an
end.

"You ok Lisa?" I asked hoping that I could get my way out of this. I'm not
sure how she'll react if she knew the whole truth, but I had a feeling she
wouldn't be happy about it.

"Umm.........yeah, I guess.......what's going on? Where am I?" She asked
looking around and looking more coherent. And still sounding a bit hoarse
from all the smoking last night.

"At my place. You came over late remember?" I asked innocently.

"No, not really." She said sounding a little angry and confused. "How did
I.......wait a second!"

"Great! Here it comes!" I thought feeling my dynasty over Lisa slip away.

"What?" I said sadly looking away. I figured what was coming next so I just
sat there looking away. I moved over a little so I could get at my
cigarettes.

"It's all coming back now! I........Oh, my god! You bastard! How could
you?" She said starting to sob.

"Lisa, I....."

"Just save it ok? I was actually falling for you and..........never mind
just forget it!" She said regaining herself and she quickly started to get
dressed.

"I didn't mean to hurt you. In fact all I did was bring something out in
you you didn't know you had." I pleaded.

"Yeah, how? By getting me to be your slave girl sex object? You used me you
fucking asshole!" she said with more sobbing in her voice. By now she was
almost fully dressed. She didn't bother to put on her panties or bra.
Clearly she wanted out of there fast.

"I know there's nothing I can say or do to take away the pain you are
feeling, but for what it's worth, I really wanted to have something special
with the real Lisa." I said.

I should have just saved it as she advised, for my words fell on deaf ears.
At this point, she was putting her coat on. I also noted that she hadn't
made any moves for her cigarettes as they lay there on the floor. This was my
last chance. Maybe her hypnotic trigger was still intact. I know I'd hurt
her alot, but I wanted to try to get her to forget this happened and try to
move forward with her as her normal self. Surely the things I had brought out
in her while hypnotized would eventually surface. Besides, it would be fun to
see her start smoking and submit to me all over again.

"Lisa, don't forget your cigarettes. Surely you need one now." I said
confidently hoping this would work. She paused at the door and turned to face
me. But I knew right away that all hope was lost by the disgusted expression
on her face.

"I hope you smoke yourself to death you sick fuck!" she yelled. The then
threw the door open and turned to face me one last time. She hocked a big
loogey undoubtedly from smoking and spat at me hitting me on the cheek. She
then slammed the door and she was gone.





Epilogue         


Lisa quit her job at the restaurant and Amanda never spoke to me again except
to say that she knew what I had done and wouldn't tell anyone and that I was
to fuck off. I found out a few months later that Lisa had been excepted to
Upstate University. I was also disappointed to find out that Upstate was a
completely non-smoking campus.

A few months after that, I quit the restaurant as well and took on a job as a
delivery driver. I saw a few women here and there and didn't even come close
to trying the stunt I pulled with Lisa. I still enjoy my fetish for women
that smoke and have gotten involved in a Dominant/submissive lifestyle.
There's a nice little club I've been going to just north of town for about
the last three years. I have taken a few girls and have had some kinky smoky
sex with some ladies that call me Master as they exhale smoke during orgasm.
I have to admit it was quite satisfying to have a girl want to do this on her
own, but nothing will ever compare to being with Lisa in her hypnotic trance.

Don't worry, I won't leave you hanging with a bad ending. I know this had
been a long story and it is my first attempt at writing a story, so bear with
me. Though, if you've read this far, you undoubtedly enjoy it and are
anxious for the ending. I'll get there in a second, but I first want to say
that I realize there is no way this could actually happen, so I wouldn't
even try it. I don't recommend for anyone else reading this to either. This
story is pure fiction. I know it. And I hope you do to. Anyways.........

I went to my club last night and sat in my usual chair smoking as I always
do. I was there for just a few minutes, when Tom, a good friend of mine and
fellow Dom sat next to Me.

"Hey! How's it going?" Tom said with a smile.

"Oh, ya know, same shit different day" I said with a sigh.

"Well, not today! There's some new blood here and she wants to meet ya!"
Tom said happily. He's a true friend and is always looking out for Me.

"Cool! It's about time for someone new. Most of the women here are either
taken, or I've had my fill of. None of them really seem interested in
anything more than one night stands or Me tying them up and beating them.
I'm really not into this bondage, beat me, humiliate me shit, Tom. Just good
ol' fashioned `Yes Master.' the way D/s should be."   

"No shit, Man! I"ve like heard this a thousand times and I'm getting
pretty fucking sick of it! Don't worry! I've told her all about you, and
she really wants to meet ya!" He said.

"Well, where is she?" I asked looking around. Before Tom could answer there
she was! It was Lisa! And she was wearing silks looking submissive as hell!
She was just getting out of the bathroom and she went to kneel on the serving
furs. That means she is awaiting a Master to command her. It looks as if her
true colors did surface despite what she had found out I had done to her. And
I mean all her true colors! As soon as she was in her kneeling position, she
reached into her purse and pulled out a pack of cigarettes. My brand, not
Amanda's!

I felt Myself get weak in the knees as I stood up to approach her. As she
took her next drag, she looked up and saw Me. It was clear to Me that she
recognized Me right away. Her reaction though was not bad by any means. As
she saw Me walk toward her, she lowered her eyes and bowed in respect to Me.
She took another drag and spoke to Me.

"So You are the One Master Tom spoke of?" Lisa said shyly.

"Yes!" I said sounding nervous handing her a rose.

She accepted the flower and looked into My eyes smiling. "I am honored,
SirHow may a girl serve You?"

"Just forgive Me, Lisa." I said sincerely.

"There is nothing to forgive, Master.I understand now." she
repiled with a soft smile.

I just stood there grinning so big it hurt. "Quitting smoking is not an
option?" I said nodding at the cigarette in her hand.

"Quitting smoking is not an option."Lisa said giggling.                       


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