Sin In The City, Part 3

Sin in the City
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Part 3:

Karrie and Jennifer finished off the joint and at 11:15, walked out the
entrance of the Flamingo. Jennifer motioned to the doorman and he waved an arm
towards a waiting taxicab. Jennifer tipped the man $3 and thanked him as
Karrie slid into the back of the cab. It was suprisingly clean and smelt of
pine air freshener. The seats were some type of black fake leather.

Jennifer slid in next to her and closed the door.

"Mind if we smoke?" Karrie asked digging into her purse.

"Just roll down the windows," the man replied flatly. He turned the steering
wheel and began navigating past the other cabs and pedestrians. "Where we
going tonight?" he asked looking into the rearview mirror.

Both ladies had lit their cigarettes and were rolling down their respective
windows. The mixture of the hot summer air, the air freshener, and their
combined exhales filled the cabs small cavity.

"We'd like to go to a Strip Club," Jennifer said through an exhale. "Where do
you recommend?"

The cabby adjusted his rear view mirror to get a better look at the two
ladies. His interest was now peaked. "The Doll House is a popular place,
caters more to women customers than men if that interests you..."

"Sounds good, you're good at reading people aren't you?" Jennifer noted and
then drew.

Karrie suddenly sat forward, almost leaning over the front seat. "Hey!" she
shouted, "This isn't one of those Taxi Cab Confession things is it?" She
exhaled into the front seat and the man rolled down his window as well.

"No ma'am, haven't had the pleasure of meeting up with those people. They
contract with a different company."

"I see," Jennifer said exhaling. "Too bad, we would have made it fun for you."

The ladies chit chatted and giggled, smoking the whole time. The cabby for the
most part ignored them and focused on his driving.


The parking lot of The Doll House was crowded. Jennifer was paying the cabby
as Karrie lit another cigarette. As the cab drove off Karrie and Jennifer
joined hands and made their way to the entrance. A long line formed outside
the front and a large bouncer was in charge of the flow of patrons in and out
of the establishment. Jennifer started towards the back, but Karrie pulled her
towards the front, approaching the bouncer.

As they approached, he motioned a flashlight towards the back of the line.
"Line starts back their ladies..." he said. He wore a headset with a
mouthpiece and earphone with wires leading to a device strapped to his waist.

Before either lady could protest, he spoke again. "You ladies here for the
amateur competition?" he questioned them.

Before Karrie could speak, Jennifer blurted out, "Yeah, sorry we're late."
Karrie looked at her friend with amazement and then smiled devilishly.

He held up a hand to shoosh them, then pressed a button on his radio. "Blake,
this is Teddy. I got two late entries out front, can I get an escort please?"
He paused and waited just a moment. "Great. I'll send them in."

Teddy lifted the rope from one side of the entrance and motioned to Karrie and
Jennifer. "Blake will meet you inside the door and escort you to the back
dressing rooms. Best of luck..." he said, replacing the rope. He reached for
the door and pulled it open.

The booming music from inside slapped them in the face, making them both
wince. The inside of the club was loud and dark. A smoky smell hung in the
air, but the buildings air system did a good job at filtering the smoke. Pink,
blue and green neon lights outlined the bar and stage. The stage was large and
in the shape of a "T". Silver poles went from the stage floor to the ceiling
in all three corners. Scantly clad women passed by carrying trays of drinks
and large men worked behind the bar furiously to keep up with the orders. 

The crowd was focused on a topless dancer who was dancing to Ozzy Osbournes
"Mamma I'm Coming Home". She was a tad heavy and she was out of rhythm with
the music. Still, the dollar bills were being offered up at a staggering pace.
Three attractive women and one man sat at the foot of the "T". They seemed to
be taking notes and judging her performance.

A large man approached and leaned in close and yelled, trying to overpower the
music. "You the ladies here for the competition?" 

Simultaneously, Karrie and Jennifer leaned in and yelled back. "YES!"

He nodded and motioned to them to follow. As they made their way through the
crowd towards a back door, Karrie leaned to Jennifer and yelled. "What in the
hell are we doing?"

"Having the times of our lives," she yelled back. She lifted her cigarette to
her lips and drew deeply, enjoying the moment. "Just follow my lead and we'll
do great, OK?" she added.

"OK!" Karrie shouted back and then drew from her own shrinking cigarette. 

As they passed through the door marked DANCERS ONLY, they both took a final
drag and crushed their cigarettes out in a nearby ashtray.

The music died down and they heard the announcer come on. "Let's give it up
for Annie everybody!" and a soft clapping and whistles quickly followed.

"These two are late!" Blake shouted to a woman holding a clipboard. She
approached quickly and began spewing out instructions to Karrie and Jennifer.
Blake stood watching the other women disrobe, talking, or doing their makeup
in the mirrors that lined the walls.

"Thank you Blake, I'll take it from here." she said dismissing him. Blake
looked a bit disappointed and then made his way back through the door.

"My name is Karen and I'm coordinating the backstage. Lets have your entry
sheet," the woman said hurriedly and annoyed. She was gorgeous and had some
type of oriental heritage. She wore a black tux jacket buttoned at the bottom
with tails and no top, fishnet stockings, and 5 inch black heels. Her hair was
jet black and hung halfway down her back.

"We don't have one," Jennifer replied. "This is kind of a last minute
thing..."

Karen rolled her eyes and handed Jennifer a sheet of paper and a pen from the
clipboard. "OK, fill out this entry form. Since you're a team, you both need
to sign it. Do you have your music?"

From the blank stares she received, she assumed the answer was a definitive
"no". "Who has the music list?" she shouted. One of the women handed her a red
binder.

Karen passed it to Karrie and continued with her hurried instructions. "These
are songs our DJ has, pick one. Write it at the top of the form." She paused
and looked out of sorts. "Shit, I cant think.." she said as she surveyed the
dressing room frantically. She turned back to the ladies and Karrie was
holding out her pack of Marlboro Lights.

A look of relief came over her. "Thank God!" she said aloud as she accepted
Karrie's generous offer. She quickly lit the cigarette and handed the lighter
and pack back to Karrie.

She drew deeply twice deeply and returned to her instructions, spurting smoke
out her mouth as she spoke. "Here's the deal. There will be one winner between
the ladies. Winner gets $2000. The other ladies get to take home any tips they
made during their dance. NO contact with the guests, PERIOD. NO vaginal
contact between the two of you, PERIOD. The judges are looking at three
things: your dancing ability, appropriateness of your dance to your music
choice, and of course sensuality. They are up front. Focusing solely on the
judges will get you graded down... in other words, play to the crowd."

The dancer "Annie" came in through a curtain and began screaming. She was
carrying a load of dollar bills. The other ladies surrounded her and
congratulated her on her performance.

Karen looked at her watch. "There's one more single and then the duos start.
There's only 3 duos, so you'll be last. Give me your sheet once you're done
filling it out. Good luck." she said and took another drag off her cigarette.
She looked to Karrie and motioned to the cigarette, exhaling, "And thanks for
this..."

Karen walked through the curtain and disappeared. Shortly after, the DJ came
over the PA and announced the next dancer was 'Cheri' from Salt Lake City. An
attractive black woman yelped and made her way towards the curtain. Tone Loc's
"Wild Thing" began blasting through the speakers, and Cheri made her way to
the stage.

"We're so far over our heads here..." Jennifer said as she filled out the
entry sheet. "Sorry I got us into this, we can back out if you want." she
offered.

Karrie was browsing through the song list and smiled. She lay the book on the
counter next to Jennifer and pointed to a song. "Check this out! I think we'll
be OK... let's go for it!" Jennifer looked up at Karrie and leaned up and gave
her a quick kiss on the lips.

"Brilliant!" she said excitedly. "Here's the plan..."


The DJ's voice interrupted the patrons for the last time for the evening. "OK
everyone, before our last duo comes out, I'd like to thank all the other girls
for your participation. You all did a great job." The mixed crowd cheered
showing their appreciation. Reading from their entry sheet, he continued. "Our
last team was a late entry but they've promised not to disappoint.  All the
way from Missoula, Montana... lets give it up for Cotton & Candy!"

The lights dimmed and a funky electric guitar riff playing a familiar tune
began to fill The Dollhouse. Karrie and Jennifer stepped out from behind the
curtain at opposite ends of the "T" and began to energetically sway to the
sounds of Motley Crue. The crowd roared as Vince Neil asked if anyone there
had "ever had one of those days?" 

Karrie and Jennifer stood still clicking their fingers and tapping their bare
feet in rhythm as they waited for the song to pick up. They had borrowed some
costumes from The Dollhouse. Karrie stood dressed in a flannel shirt, tied at
the waist in a knot, revealing her tattoo and pierced belly. A pair of tight
cut off jeans unbuttoned and unzipped revealed the beginnings of her pubic
mound. She wore a bright yellow construction hard hat pulled seductively over
her eyes. 

Jennifer stood at the opposite end, mimicking her lovers dance moves. An LA
Dodgers cap was pulled over her eyes and she wore a matching jersey. She wore
no shorts, just her own white lace panties.

As Tommy Lee began slamming a drum intro, Karrie and Jennifer lit their
cigarettes and began their dance. 

The crowd roared as the two spun on the poles. Karrie had already tossed her
hard hat aside and was crawling seductively towards the lucky patrons on her
side of the stage. She let the cigarette dangle as she slowly drew on it and
inhaled the smoke deeply into her body. She singled out a man holding up a
twenty dollar bill and exhaled as she took the twenty in her mouth with her
tongue.

On the opposite end, Jennifer had unbuttoned her jersey and let it hang open,
revealing her ample breasts. She stood with one hand behind her head and slid
a hand into her panties. She made a surprised look and then took it out and
ran her index finger across her nipples while she exhaled on them as well.

"Smokin in the boys room...." wailed out in a funky metallic riff.

As the chorus banged out, Karrie and Jennifer met in the center of the stage
and began undressing each other. High as kites, they were lost in the moment.
When they were both nude, Karrie drew deeply on her cigarette, triple pumping
and filling her lungs. Karrie and Jennifer both tossed their cigarettes aside
on the back of the stage and embraced in a hot smoky kiss. 

The crowd got rowdier as they watched these two vixens kissing and touching
each others breasts and ass. When they broke their embrace, Karrie fell to
Jennifer's feet and began licking her way up her calf and thigh. Jennifer
tilted her head back and exhaled Karrie's smoke in a tight cone towards the
ceiling. The red stage lights highlighted it and it looked like a volcano was
erupting.

That was the moment that the crowd lost it and began going crazy. Dollar bills
of all denominations were being tossed on the stage so fast that it looked
like confetti in a ticker tape parade. Even the judges tossed money on stage,
encouraging Cotton and Candy to go to the extreme.

For the remainder of the song, they danced on opposite sides by the foot of
the "T". The lucky patrons on those ends were treated to spread eagle shots of
both ladies shaved, wet pussies. One very attractive woman patron held up a
freshly lit Marlboro red with a $50. Jennifer took the fifty and dropped it on
stage with the rest of the cash that was piling up quickly. She took a deep
drag and then inhaled deeply and held the smoke. She then quickly dipped the
filter into her wet hole, coating the end.

She motioned to the astonished woman to come closer to the stage. She leaned
forward and Jennifer exhaled into her face as she placed the filter into the
womans open mouth. The woman drew hungrily on the cigarette coating her lips
with Jennifer's juices. She withdrew the filter and snap inhaled a large ball
of smoke into her lungs, then winked and licked her lips.

The lights dimmed quickly as the song ended, leaving Karrie and Jennifer in a
sensuous kiss that lasted for a minute. The crowd cheered louder as their kiss
grew in intensity. Finally the DJ interrupted and Karen stepped on stage to
interrupt their kiss. The crowd stood in an ovation that was deafening to the
ears. Karen handed two robes to them and they began collecting the cash from
the stage as the judges began tabulating their votes.


At 4:05 in the morning, Karrie and Jennifer lay in the hot tub in their room
surrounded by candles. They were lost in a deep kiss that was lasting forever.
The warm water bubbled around them and tickled every nook and cranny of their
bodies. A pay per view adult movie played on the big screen TV while the two
fingered each other endlessly. A half smoked joint lay smoldering in an
ashtray next to their two empty drink glasses.

Karrie stood and sat on the edge of the hot tub spreading her legs. She picked
up the joint and drew hard, bringing it back to life. As she inhaled,
Jennifer's mouth and tongue played with her swollen clitoris. Her cloudy mind
and dizzy eyes turned to the pile of cash that lay on the bed. Karrie smiled
as she pulled Jennifer's head in tighter to her. She placed the joint back in
the ashtray and reached for a nearby pack of her cigarettes. She flipped the
box back with her thumb and shook the pack. A cigarette sprung out and Karrie
leaned forward and plucked it out with her lips. She picked up a candle and
lifted it to the tip, and drew hard bringing it to life.

Jennifer licked harder and it was paying off. Karrie exhaled lazily from her
nose as she continued to draw. Her hips began rocking to a rhythm she couldn't
control. As she felt the wave grow, Karrie brought the candle to her chest and
tipped it slightly. The hot wax splashed against her nipples, sending Karrie
into a frenzy. She cried out in pleasure and pain as she came again and again.
She continued to pour the hot wax across her body causing her skin to flinch
and retract. The wax ran for a few seconds until it began to harden forming a
random web like pattern.

Jennifer was lost in her own world, oblivious to Karrie's shouts. When she
finally looked up, Karrie's head was tilted back against the wall. Her eyes
were closed and a smoldering cigarette dangled from her open mouth. Her body
was covered with a sporadic design of red wax and ashes from the cigarette.
She stood and removed the cigarette from her lovers lips and took a final long
drag on it. 

She dipped the butt into the water and tossed it next to the burnt out joint
as she exhaled. She was dizzy and could barely stand on her own. Her nursing
instincts somehow surfaced and she pulled Karrie away from the wall. From
behind, she pulled her off of the tub and towards the bed. Karrie's limp body
was heavier than it seemed and her legs crashed to the ground as Jennifer
pulled her the edge of the tub and onto the bed.

Breathing heavy from moving Karrie, Jennifer sat at the foot of the bed and
panted. She tried to focus her eyes but found it was too strenuous on her
body. Instead, she just fell back onto Karrie legs and passed out. The smoke
filled room buzzed with noises and sights, but neither was conscious to enjoy
the adult movie that played, or the hot tub which still bubbled, or the
candles that shimmered, or the bright lights of the town that never slept.

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